B&A: What are your impressions of this?

I like blurbs to give more insight than just how great the main character is. You need to add more detail about the circumstances of the story, beef it up a bit. I also don't like the last sentence--it's very generic and cliched. You have to give more than the description of the character and the fact that problems are going to arise--in any good story, the latter is always a given.